4 thoughts on “Chapter 23 Bonus: Passing Notes

      1. Raven

        You should put Nikki and Javier in a dangerous situation and end up letting only Javier survive.

        Make him into a true hate symbol. I want people spitting curses just by seeing his name mentioned in the story.The Snape of Caelum Lex, except without a redeeming ending.

        I’m running on pure caffeine, so pardon my hate-mongering. Makes me feisty (that’s the word I chose, and I’m sticking to it!).


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